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Bardzo proszę o poprawienie błędów! :) Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in response to the article I have recently read in Your newspaper. I would like to comment on the main thesis of this article which states that girls should help their parents at home. Unfortunately I can't agree with this statement. The author of this article claims that girls are more skilful and willing to help at home. Personally, I think that if boys were more encouraged by their parents to do sometning at home, they would also learn a lot, for example how to cook or do the ironing. Secondly, the author writes that household duties are only for girls and boys shouldn't bother themselves doing such things because it is very feminine. Well, someone forgets that living together demands each member of a family to take care of a house and it is advisable that everyone helps. In my opinion, boys should also be involved in running a house. Cooking, washing the dishes or doing the ironing is not a big deal and everyone can learn how to do it. I am really grateful to my mother who has taught me how to take care of myself and now I live on my own and I don't have to worry what to make for a dinner. I hope that the author of the article will take my arguments into consideration and change his/her mind.
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about 13 years ago
Moim zdaniem nie ma żadnych błędów, ale w przedostatnim zdaniu napisałabym tak: I am really grateful to my mother who taught me how to take... Chyba niepotrzebny tam Present Perfect:D
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about 13 years ago
całość masz poprawnie tylko present perfekt na końcu jest niewłaściwy do tego czasu w jakim piszesz ;] MaM NaDzEjE Że PoMoGłAm.;'d
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